1.words and expressions
as long as it nudges his curiosity and tugs at his sleeve.
nudge\ to push someone gently ,usually with your elbow, in order to get their attention?
腦補(bǔ)莫名其妙被人推了一下，自然很奇怪想知道他干啥呢 nudge his curiosity
tug \ to pull something hard in a particular direction?
看見tug at his sleeve,像小時候拉著爸爸衣服袖子讓他別去出差，再陪我一會兒。 類似于文中 一直吸引著讀者的注意力，不讓讀者走神或者直接不看
nose about in obscure crannies of the newspaper
cranny \a very small hole or opening ,especially in a wall 引申為報紙的每一個小角落
barbecue their skins
日光浴的這種說法好可愛
Most of us are still prisoners of the lesson pounded into us by the ...teachers of our youth
[教育相關(guān)作文}
The reader's interests begins to falter；the tension you have built begins to sag.
2.thoughts
Q1;How to start?
:1.the length:no pat answer, but sometimes depend on the audience.
2.give hard details and coax the reader a little more
3.give sentence an extra twist of humor or surprise
4.two morals: collect more material than you will use and look for material everywhere
5.fresh perception or detail
Q2: How to stop?
1.the perfect ending should take your readers slightly by surprise and yet seem exactly right.
2.For the nonficon writer:look for the nearest exit
3.The author will strike at the end an echo of a note that was sounded at the beginning.
4.Quotation ?works best and try to surprise others.
